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The Best Book on Revision, Period

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If you’re up early to get that post fixed so that it’s ready to publish, but you can’t seem to get the wording quite right.  Here’s a book that can help:

Getting the Words Right: How to Revise, Edit & Rewrite by Theodore A. Rees Cheney.

There are a number books on writing well  that include the topic of revision among others that I find helpful.  Several of them focus on fiction-writing.

Why then this book? Because Cheney gets down into the word-for-word, phrase-by-phrase, sentence-after-sentence trenches.  His focus is not on fiction-writing techniques  but on all writing and, as his title implies, on “getting the words right.”

Here are a few choice quotes:

“Diction lies at the heart of style.”

“A process central to writing—careful thought”

“Are the words together that belong together?”

The book lives up to its title. Plus, I think Cheney included just about every revision and rewriting technique in existence for improving my writing. So it’s very useful to me for recalling all the things I can do when editing. and also for reminding me of some  techniques I can profitably use more often.

I can thumb my way through my thoroughly-underlined and highlighted copy of this book and more often than not discover what is wrong with that piece I’m working on.

Theodore Cheney was an interesting guy.

At 17 he traveled to the Antarctic with Admiral Byrd, the pioneering American aviator and polar explorer,  and later returned on excursions of his own to polar regions. He earned degrees in geology and geography. He published books and earned an MA in communication. He held a position as a senior scientist at a “think tank.” And he conducted writer workshops and was the director of the Writing Concentration Program at Fairfield University.

This book has come out in a newer edition: Getting the Words Right: 39 Ways to Improve your Writing. I prefer the older version, previous title above.  Both are available at online bookstores.

Mr. Cheney also wrote Creative Non-fiction Writing that details how a writer can use fiction devices to add drama and vividness to her non-fiction work.

Highly recommended

What books on writing have you found helpful, including those that cover revision? Please feel free to comment and share.

Give up on that Piece you’re Writing!

Actor George Peppard, at right, with actress V...

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It just wasn’t going well.  I had been struggling away with a post I planned to offer to another blog for a guest post.  I had written it and re-written it.  It wasn’t bad. It was okay.  But it definitely didn’t thrill me.  There had to be a better approach.

So I put it away, yesterday.  Today I was reading a post by Ali Hale (http://www.aliventures.com/), and some of her words got me thinking about my post. Suddenly a whole new approach occurred.  Fortunately I was near my computer and it was on. I started to type and it just flowed.

And I can say along with George Peppard, his favorite expression in his hit TV show A-team (a few years back, I might add) “I love it when a plan comes together!”  I love it when my writing comes together–and sings.

So when you find you’re struggling with a piece of writing, I suggest you put it away, over night maybe, and then try the “mental approach.”  Mull it over. But keep a notebook and pen or a digital voice recorder or your iPad handy, just in case–then when magical words start flowing, get crazy, playful and audacious.  And have fun!

P.S. This was a “mini-post.” Most will be longer, but I liked this one so much I decided to lead of with it.  Hope you find it helpful.